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Valentine's Day Sweets

A tongue with good luck is embraced
By a honeyed candy-like taste
This holiday treat
Is a fabulous eat
And lies under silk lingerie laced

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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:10:00 PM

    Duke, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 11:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Duke! Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 12:36:00 AM

    Delicious. Glad to take a bite of this poem! (: Wonderfully written Duke. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:52:00 PM

    Well, this is quite nice Duke ;}

    Beaufort Avatar Duke Beaufort Date: 2/17/2013 4:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debbie, thanks. The inspiration for this (in my head) was originally a piece of candy wrapped in a fancy piece of perforated paper. As I was thinking about it, the instinctive evil part of me took over. I think this really fits the "limerick" bill of fare.
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 6:11:00 PM

    Sounds like a very sweet Valentine's day! Sultry write! Hugs

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:06:00 AM

    It sounds like somebody's gonna have a good 14th of Feb! Great limerick... Terry

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 7:33:00 AM

    Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this one..A very subtle message..Sara