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In The Meadow

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In The Meadow

In the shallows of dreadful meadows, 
the forgotten becomes the fergetful shadows, 
in pains 
we crush our little gains, 
the mill we grind, 
stirred with strokes behind. 
We let go our sorow, 
derive joy in d furrow, 
we gather to sing, 
as to aleviate our sting, 
the urge in us to complain, 
quenched by apathy in campaign, 
our venom rises, 
but depreciate as to our crises, 
and in the shallows of dreadful meadows, 
we become the forgetful shadows

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:18:00 AM

    wow..another win. in a skat contest.. pd

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:46:00 AM

    :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Nathan's "Razor Sharp" contest!!! awesome winning write. LOVE LOVE * Linda

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 3:12:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning poem

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 7:43:00 AM

    Congratulations on you fine win. Connie

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 9:52:00 PM

    O David, :-) Congrats! with your awesome razor sharp poem................ SKAT

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 9:26:00 PM

    congrats ' NATE

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 5:59:00 PM

    I really like the way the words wind through creating such touching emotion. It is a poem of awakening. Great last line : ) congratulations on the win in the contest

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 5:34:00 PM

    I congratulate you on a beautiful entry that is well deserving of your win.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 4:24:00 PM

    Wonderful piece,David...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:45:00 PM

    O David, :-) Congratulations in the Rhyming contest. I'm enjoying all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~