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Save The Last Dance

I saved you the last dance,
So let's dance the night away,
And wish that the music never ever stops,

I keep hoping and praying that this music never stops,
And my feet never get tired to dance,
And your mind never thinks of walking away,

I felt your heart beat from miles away,
So gentle and in sync with mine and it never ever stops,
In your embrace i found my music so let's dance,

Tonight lest dance the night away until the music stops,


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  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:16:00 AM

    Congrad's on your win. So nice to read a new form. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:46:00 AM

    So romantic! Awesome job in this contest. Big congrats! :)

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 7:33:00 AM

    May I have this dance? This is beautiful..cangrats. BG

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:29:00 PM

    BILLY, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

    Simani Avatar Billy Simani Date: 3/14/2013 2:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's an honor to amaze and entertain people i admire and hope to be like in the near future. I promise to work hard and fight my way to the top with passion.
  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:56:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Billy xx

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 6:34:00 AM

    Billy congrats on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 4:33:00 AM

    Love this beautiful poem Billy!Congrats on your win in the contest.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 1:56:00 AM

    Billy congrats on your win, an excellent write...David

    Simani Avatar Billy Simani Date: 3/14/2013 2:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, i never saw it coming but i felt it.
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:53:00 PM

    Billy, I just loved the pure romantic energy of this one. Congrats for your win in my contest.

    Simani Avatar Billy Simani Date: 3/14/2013 2:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh my God. I did it again... am speechless. This one was inspired by my girlfriend, i met her on the dance floor. Thanks a lot, its an honor.