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V DAY

V  DAY


Cupid, 
God of immortal love,
The sharpest arrows for me
Prepare
Thy archery, on my aching heart
To practice,

Be accurate,
I THEE, Implore
For
I will die at once  
If Thou MISS 
The TARGET!



©Demetrios Trifiatis
    14 February 2013


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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:54:00 PM

    nice one ;} thank you for reading I call her name ;}

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:46:00 PM

    powerful poem is this,,

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:40:00 AM

    May Cupids aim be straight and true and find its way to you! Love This! Thank you for kind comments! Lori

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:44:00 PM

    So clever, V day indeed!!! Cute!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 4:34:00 PM

    Demetrios well said,....David

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:49:00 AM

    I like this, but I know that Cupid won't miss. You are safe. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/14/2013 12:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    If He misses I will Die, but since you are certain He won't then here I hope to be next year! Happy V D. Thank you!
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 10:56:00 AM

    Yes the day is yours ..... <3 <3 <3 - Happy Valentine's day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 4:15:00 AM

    Deep and timely piece..Sir..The V-Day just begun :-)

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/14/2013 4:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much!