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TOMORROW IS THE DAY

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TOMORROW IS THE DAY

TOMORROW IS THE DAY

my sweet valentine
i have searched the world over
unable to find
a girl as perfect as you
end my search – say you’ll be mine

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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 10:24:00 PM

    so sweet, DAver. You are really getting into tanka lately!!

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 10:48:00 PM

    A message to the point Daver, as the day is yet to dawn, may her reply highlight a pristene morn...)Was that a little to cheesy..? "but then I never knew what that mean't" cheesy I mean...Oh well I guess I'll never be perfect...!!!

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:20:00 PM

    I like this short "sweet" tanka ;} you have a nice valentines day ;}

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 12:21:00 PM

    i'm here, .. but no, I do hope you find your perfect girl Austin xx

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 10:56:00 AM

    Thanks for stopping by to comment on my haiku! I was struck by the sweetness of this, but also the longing that comes through. The stuff of a Greek tragedy (in modern style). Well done.