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KISS OF LIFE

When I was weak,
And all seemed bleak,
You showed up,
And gave me a peep,
Into tomorrow,
From then,
Everything changed,
You took my heart,
And kept it,
Grew it,
Protected it,
Of you,
I have sweet memories,
Our running in the sand,
Towards the sun,
Our warm nights of July,
And now,
I'm positive,
With new life,
The next generation,
Of bright life,
A product,
Of our love,
I will never forget,
When we first met,
But for now,
Let me stop,
And say thank you,
That I met you,
When our eyes met,
And you gave me,
The wet,red lip,
The chilling,killing smooch,
The kiss of life.

Word Craft
2013

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  1. Date: 4/30/2013 5:49:00 PM

    Wow, another impressive poem! Lucky to have stumbled upon your work today. This invokes such a beautiful, vivid picture. I like a poem that gets under my skin. "the chilling, killing smooch" Well said! Always, Laura

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 5/2/2013 2:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aw Thank you Laura for your beautiful views,Your pieces are deeper,I'm glad you loved the piece..thanks once again and nice time dear..Word Craft.. :-)
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 4:11:00 AM

    - A truly romantic poem Word. - Must every day feels like a sweet kiss. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) (I posted "Just a Kiss" yesterday)

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 4/10/2013 4:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne i must confess,-Just A Kiss- is soooo "toxic".....the type you cant read without responding to :-)
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 12:19:00 PM

    WICKED LIKE THIS WHATS COOL ALSO i HAVE WROTE A POEM LAST YEAR FOR COMPOTISON ON HERE WITH SAME TITLE LOVE THIS AND THNKS FOR COMENTS ON MINE DAV IDSCOTT

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 4/10/2013 4:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hehehehe Dave..thanks for your views..let me find the twin version of it you did :-)
  1. Date: 4/3/2013 8:14:00 AM

    Excellent piece here..reminds me of some of the thoughts in a poem I wrote.

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 4/8/2013 4:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh thank you Script...kindly give me the title i'd love to look it up a enjoy the beauty that streams from a a beautiful poetic mind such as yours :-)
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 6:56:00 AM

    very good job on this my friend..

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 2/27/2013 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Betty...your work is better..thanks to amazing poets like you..I'm learning something new each day, thank you:-)
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:28:00 AM

    lovely poem and to.say.thankyou and have.gratitude makes it more special..Charma

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 2/21/2013 1:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Charma..for your uplifting comments :-)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:09:00 PM

    intresting thoughts you have penned here.

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 2/14/2013 3:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Most thankful John..am so humbled :-)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Dear Sir, A very thoughtful and sentimental writing that touches the heart without leaving indifferent the mind!

    CRAFT Avatar WORD CRAFT Date: 2/14/2013 3:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Deeply humbled sir..it's an honor to have your views...once again thank you Demetrios:-)