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The Ill Pill

There are pills and pills, big and little pills Just run up long unnecessary bills If you take my advice, I think that Its all there in your head, you can combat... Taking pills won't make the ailment go away Will just temporarily your pain allay Pills will put you to sleep, they kill Insidiously into your heart a hole drill.... Dependancy on these capsules or tablets will simply lower your red blood platelets It would do good to keep them away from you If you are depressed, bawl away, to stop feeling blue Over the counter drugs sold should be monitored Before dispensing medicines, a doctor should be referred.. contest " Pill Of Life" 13/02/2013

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:28:00 PM

    Congratulations Yasmin :-)

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 2:24:00 PM

    Hi Yasmin,,,, lol..last but not least... I just read all of "the pill of life" poems... wow... is it okay to say, I'm feeling a bit overdosed now...LOL... all them good feelings and needy poems... ha ha.. makes me wonder where's the need for good speed... anyways.. now i read yours, and gosh I got to say, your pill took me on another route. the truthful one.. not a foggy i wish we had this pill ..la la la ... anyways~ I have a headache, I'm gonna run down to the drug store and get some pills without the doctors referral.LOL, JK :-) xox~ PD

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 1:35:00 PM

    Great winning work about how pills are not the answer to everything..Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 1:25:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 10:24:00 AM

    Many congratulations Yasmin luv xx

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 8:06:00 PM

    Well done Yasmin ......Seren

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 5:35:00 PM

    congrats on your win Yasmin

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 3:58:00 PM

    INdeed, we have more than our share of pills these days. that was an awesome rhyming title, Ill Pill , very creative. I really like your entry into the contest, sweetie. Tell me your favorite movie of the year!!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 5:13:00 PM

    Yes indeed, Yas...A good bawl beats the blues every time...Pills, etc. only dull the pain, and who wants to be dull?...Well said, my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 4:12:00 AM

    Yas, yep go for the placebo affect, I like it and good luck...David

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:50:00 PM

    i lost my love to pills.

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 12:24:00 PM

    Very true Yasmin, unfortunately some are necessary to prolong life, but I do think over the counter ones should seriously be monitored, well done luv xx

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 11:39:00 AM

    I agree a good bawl does the soul good...good luck....