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The Perfect One

She can be the perfect one, There is nothing that she hasn't done. The way she moves, it stops a million hearts, And still she makes the tastiest tarts! Everything is in place when she is around, She has a special bond with everyone around. A lady like her is a dream of many, She is the most humorous and really funny! When darkness dooms the entire room, She lightens it up with her own bloom. Let me tell you who am talking about, Ofcourse, it is my mother without any doubt! By Asma Khan.

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  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:53:00 AM

    She's indeed the perfect one! gREAT POEM, simple yet strong :}

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/24/2013 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I know.. Thanks alot! :)
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:08:00 AM

    Hi asma khan, good luck in the contest, good dedication to your mother, peace & love, debra

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/15/2013 6:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Debra :)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 4:35:00 AM

    Nice one! nothing beats a mothers love.

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/14/2013 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank u Wade! :)