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I want to be in heaven

That feeling that takes your breath away faster than any form of beauty ever discovered, 
That feeling when your life just lifts into a phenomenon like no other, 
That feeling when you glance into this invisible universe, 
Just staring into space no one but you can see, 
That feeling when you’re heart races and you sweat with temptation, 
By the heat of this unexplained situation, 
That feeling when you feel like its heaven, 
You don't want to be anywhere else but by that incredible vibe, 
That feeling when you came into my life and touched my heart with your angelic hands, 
That feeling when you kissed me and sucked my living soul out and spat it into the heavens above, 
That feeling when you were my distraction, 
My invisible universe, 
You were the closest feeling to heaven, 
You are all I crave.
My heart longs for that burning desire,
My heart longs for you,
I want to be in heaven.


*’That feeling when you glance into this invisible universe, 
Just staring into space no one but you can see’
Meaning that no one can see what you are busy day- dreaming.

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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 11:50:00 AM

    Very breath taking piece, my dear poet friend. Well done

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn Date: 2/18/2013 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you :)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 12:06:00 PM

    Yes day dreaming.......ahhhhhh this sums it up...beautiful

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn Date: 2/13/2013 10:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you :)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 11:12:00 AM

    Awesome poem it rocks from here to heaven and back Wade, if this was for a Valentine contest, it would win hands down, thanks for sharing, it made me smile and it made my day, xxx Rose

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn Date: 2/13/2013 10:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hey Rose thanjs for that :) that means alot, and im glad my work can make someone smile. be blessed
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 8:55:00 AM

    a beautiful poem wade.. keep writing! :)

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn Date: 2/13/2013 10:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you asma :) i shall do that
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 8:32:00 AM

    awesome!!!heavenly!!!

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn Date: 2/13/2013 10:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)