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Pill Of Life

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Pill Of Life

Forcing me to hallucinate an unrealistic fate,
This life of mine does make me play,games I love to hate.
Die I may if I don't play,and sit with tears in eyes,
win,I do, to see the day at the cost of others' cries.
Some may win and some may lose, like gluttons we eat through dreams,
to do what he wants to,a rich may chose,the rest ignored downstream's.
Never can we pursue our likes,our dislikes we may follow 
what we want to be,we don't,and life just makes us hollow.
empty within with dreams all drained,in the kitchen of a fantasy butcher,
posing as reality of life,forcing us to usher.
why my dreams are censored and cut,and mould to other's needs,
to do what I want and be what I be, these thoughts all plucked like weeds.
If Pill of Life be a personified lady, I would beg "O Miss,
take me from dream butchers to a land of eternal bliss."



Contest name - PILL OF LIFE
date-16th Feb,2013. Saturday.

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  1. Date: 6/26/2013 3:48:00 PM
    You are really skilled as a poet. I would like to see more of your work... Jake

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 2:13:00 AM
    Well expressed feelings in an amazing sonnet..... Thanks for dropping by, Adarsh... Well appreciated...

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:25:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this one again. Have a good night.

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 6/25/2013 10:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again sir,Good night....
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 1:57:00 AM
    I love the true nature of your poem. Very brilliantly written. Congrats Adarsh. AO

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 6/25/2013 11:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 10:14:00 PM
    Excellent. Great work. Congrats . Tfs

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 6/25/2013 11:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you sir...
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 1:47:00 PM
    You have the traits of a skilled writer and the heart of a poet congrats Adarshxxx

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 6/25/2013 11:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot , ma'am
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win...David

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 2:18:00 PM
    Adarsh, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 2/26/2013 11:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Linda :)
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 1:36:00 PM
    Great winning work..Congrats on your good job..Sara

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 2/26/2013 4:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 10:23:00 AM
    Many congratulations Adarsh xx

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 2/26/2013 4:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot sir.
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 3:27:00 PM
    Good job on this poem, I like it.

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:22:00 PM
    Such sadness, I hope you are brought to a realization of happy dreams far beyond current perspectives and sadned imaginations. You are articulate and no one here will limit your pen or expression. You have much to look forward too. Fly little bird, fly!

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 2/23/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you sir.
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 6:47:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup, if you need any help don't hesitate to ask. Light & Love

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 2/23/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks a lot ma'am.
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 12:12:00 PM
    This is one of the best poems I've read for the contest...good luck

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 2/23/2013 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    wow, i never knew i wrote so good, thank you ma'am.
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:29:00 AM
    this is a great poem, goodluck with the contest, you will do well.

    Raj Avatar Adarsh Raj
    Date: 2/23/2013 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks a lot sir.