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  1. Date: 1/29/2014 4:25:00 PM

    You're quite a thinker here... Thank you for your help with the pictures... My computers are messing up a lot lately... Will be trying a picture later... Thank you my friend.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 3:07:00 PM

    Well yes I suppose Ruben.. I sort of got some contact with the theme..? Hmm..then i got lost a bit in unrequited instances, for instance there were abstact days, and memories..yes it seems quite a maze; truly descriptive of life awareness as far as i can see..! I think well done indeed..!

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 8:51:00 PM

    This is a great write Ruben, Ahhh Tomorrows Never come!!! Hey wanted to Thank You for stopping by Beccas blog to wish me a Happy Birthday, I really appreciated it. : )

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 3:09:00 PM

    yes, a good lesson here to live in the moment. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:56:00 PM

    Introspects from a brilliant mind...I love this Ruben. Thanks for your kind comment which I truly appreciate. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 11:26:00 AM

    soupmail for ya

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:34:00 PM

    Ruben. your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 11:21:00 AM

    Very well done, I enjoy drawing meaning of these lines that invoke questions within!

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 6:48:00 PM

    So nice to hear from you tonight! Glad you liked my Gal's & thanks for the hints Dee is tough! As to the peces yes I feel we have many bodies look here Light & Love handsome!

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 8:54:00 AM


  1. Date: 3/10/2013 2:00:00 PM

    Spirited and free, Ruben, nice! Jimbo

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:58:00 AM

    Ruben just called to see your next gem...David

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 1:51:00 PM

    Not complaining about the house or miles just all the wasted time in between here and there. So, we stay there a while and here a while trying to take care of Biz at both ends and travel in the middle. See, you when I can. Charles

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 1:49:00 PM

    Thanks for the comment on my poem. I have not been on the soup as much in the last two weeks because I just wiped my hard drive after 4 years of input. Took me a solid week to get all back on and the bugs off but have windows 7 now intstead of xp pro. Am having to convert files and such as some things are not compatible now. Have window 8 coming but may sit on it a while. This was one more big headache. We are also in the throes of rebuilding an old 4300 square foot house 185 miles from home.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 10:02:00 AM

    love this clever write, Ruben - Congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 4:38:00 AM

    Just got a comment from our old friend Raul Moreno...blew me away!....Glad to see him back!...Have you heard from him yet? - Tim

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:08:00 PM

    Dear Brother Ruben, Hope this finds YOU and Ours Healthy and High in the Spirit. Befor I comment on the POEM"Tomorrows Ago" What's up with the "Ex Ruben O" Does that mean I'm an Ex Brother, it's OK I'm use to it, But Why? YOUR Title captured my curiousity "Tomorrows" the Future: "Ago" the Past. Ingenious (spelling) I traveled this POEM from beginning to end Superb Pen. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Brother...Harry Soup Mail Call

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:18:00 AM

    Ruben, congratulations with your awesome win..xox~PD

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:29:00 AM

    Congrats Ruben!!A great poem in this challenging form!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 2:12:00 PM

    Congratulations again, Ruben. One fits all :-) Love, Su

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:11:00 PM

    'Ah' indeed. Wonderful write Rube!! Congratulations on your win! Huggss deb

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:25:00 AM

    You still have time, what's stopping you? Congrad's on your winning write.Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:22:00 AM

    Ruben Congratulations on your placement in my contest, I gather this was for a couple of contests, I loved the journey this took me on, quite a twist, well done...David

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:45:00 AM

    You are a heart stunning writer! Thank you for your so well regarded... and welcome comment on my dedication....To Catie L....someone who has affected me here no other... as a Poetess, Heartthrob... and Friend.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:42:00 PM your winning poem..pd

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:40:00 AM

    Ruben, always pensive thoughts from you that we all can relate to, wonderfully written. BTW, I agree, in the blog that it's a sonnet, just that it's an interesting form of sonnet that historians have discussed as well.

    cornish Avatar craig cornish Date: 3/1/2013 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And awesome first in the contest!
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:21:00 PM

    Truly Lekker writing Thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:28:00 PM

    Congratulations on a very fine and well deserved win, Ruben! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:18:00 PM

    Well this one makes the reader stop and take notice of self for sure. More years behind than ahead, things put off...sighhhh.. Excellent points in these thoughtful verses. Well deserved win for sure !!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:05:00 PM

    You the man Ruben, congrats on excellent win!