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GURO, MAHAL KITA

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GURO, MAHAL KITA


Guro, your innovation has potency, Oceans reform between coupled words, Here, life shares its language, its coherency, where quills lift the wings of Flaming Sunbirds. Lines travel with intent, a gentle verve, touching the past before tapping tomorrow, truth lays down straight lines, but images curve, a geography built by shades of sorrow. Each verse becomes a world unexplored, night softens its crush, day nurses old scars, for joy never stays; Gone, those we’ve adored, though not so far, Friend, not so very far. Poetry has left the page, no longer alone, breaching the soul, wizening even bone.
Inspired by Nette's LANGUAGE OF NERUDA'S HEART, It seemed to fit that the way she feels about Neruda's heart is the way I feel about hers. *Filopino translation of Guro, Mahal Kita is: Teacher, I love you The Flaming Sunbird is only found in the Phillipines... Nette, just drop a word to anyone, anyone at all to say you are well. I am so very worried. You are missed. Tremendously. xoxox

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 6:25:00 PM
    nette sure had her own style! then again so do you ;) sis..lovely tribute verse. Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:07:00 PM
    Cyndi, Thank you so much for doing this in Nette's honor. I pray that she comes back soon and share her gentle heart again. Annalise

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:00:00 PM
    nice Cyndi, ... your awesome...PD

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:36:00 PM
    I hope she has a chance to read this tribute. Why am I not surprised to learn her fondness for Neruda's teachings? It is just what I would have expected. Lovely poem for Nette, Cyndi!

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 11:31:00 AM
    Perfect tribute with a Nette like approach--hope she reads these

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    Date: 2/20/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And it was very thoughtful of you to host this---she likes to travel, so we hope that's what she is doing!
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 7:47:00 AM
    There are many things which I'd like to thank you for today my dear friend, Cyndi. First, for sharing this very beautiful and great poem of yours; second, for my fantastic place in your contest. It's really a great honor to be chosen by a great poet like you, thank u so much for liking my poem. Third, for holding this contest so that we could reach out to our very dear friend. Biggest congrat, will go to you my dear Cyndi! Hope & pray Nette will come back soon. I miss her too. For everything TY

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 11:34:00 PM
    A fitting last tribute to Nette......Seren

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:51:00 AM
    SOUP MAIL...............

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:56:00 AM
    You are a flaming Sunbird to my eye Cyndi, love always xxx