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              scent of the rose
           kindles love in her eyes--
             wine glass clinks

the lovers drink
wild thirst in their first kiss--
golden moon shines

              supple skin fades
             yet love swells over--
              is nature envious?

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  1. Date: 5/11/2013 9:18:00 PM

    Hello Mehnaz :-) Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 9:24:00 AM

    very sensual, congrats on your well deserved win

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:52:00 AM

    Yes! This is my personal favorite, congratulations on excellent win.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:23:00 PM

    Congratulations my dear friend Mehnaz for your very lovely write and super win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 2:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Leonara...
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:07:00 PM

    I remember this well. Congrats on your very deserved win.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 2:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Andrea...
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 7:24:00 PM

    congrats on a great win Mehnaz

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 2:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Joseph...
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:14:00 PM

    Lovely, congratulations. -Jeremy

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 2:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Jeremy...
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 1:52:00 PM

    Mehnaz, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 2:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Linda, for all the support and love....
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 7:49:00 PM

    Great sequence of haiku, Mehnaz! The first one is my fav! Ruben.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 2:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Ruben..
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 8:16:00 AM

    Very touching, we travel many years in but a few words. Soup mail

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 3:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Richard ....thanks for your help and kindness...
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 5:01:00 AM

    This one is so romantic and passionate..I think that nature would be rejoicing to see such a great love..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 3:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much ,Sara..
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:49:00 PM

    this one is so precious. I loved the wild thirst in their kiss!! and the question at the end was a great final touch.

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:20:00 PM

    Mehnaz, oooo...I'm peeking to early... stopping by to thank you, so so much for the kindness always~ LINDA

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 3:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Linda... :)
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 5:54:00 PM

    Just beautiful and poetic!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 3:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you...
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 5:01:00 PM

    So so romantic and beautiful

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 5:00:00 PM

    So so romantic and beautiful

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 3:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Donna for the kind words...
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 2:41:00 PM

    Feel the romance in every line! Lovely write! :)

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 3:36:00 AM

    This is a very good entry into PD's contest Mehnaz! I loved where this poem took me, into a realm of love and romance! What a delightful piece this write truly is, Great Work!!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 2:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 2:52:00 AM

    This is a beautiful haiku series Mehnaz ending with a thoughtful questionku. Enjoyed reading your work.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/17/2013 2:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Yesha...