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I Am Nothingness,I Am Nobody

I am nothingness...I am nobody But a lowly sinner never meaning to be proud I am nothingness...I am nobody Burdened by chains of sin forever bound I am nothinness...I am nobody But beads of sweat wiped from the brow I am nothingnes...,I am nobody As a lonely king who no longer wears a crown I am nothingness...I am nobody But a forgotten memory no longer to be found I am nothingness...I am nobody Like a harmonized instrument with no joyous sound I am nothingness...I am nobody But a forgotten field never again to be plowed I am nothingness...I am nobody Standing at an entrance though never to be allowed I am nothingness....I am nobody Somewhere in a distant time with no one else around I am nothingness...I am nobody But a fallen tear cast upon the ground I am nothingness.........I am nobody.....
Danny Boy:2-12-13 *I know this is kind of sad, but they are just words that fell from my mind onto paper.So I thought I would share them that's all... :o)

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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 9:16:00 AM

    A sad song! I hope these words won't crowd your brain again. Once is enough...Take a deep breath and remember "You really are somebody!" Cynthia

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 9:55:00 AM

    To realize our weaknesses and nothingness makes us somebody special in our Creators eyes for sure..I love your poetry..you shouldnt doubt that:)..I love it cos its written with heart and soul:)

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 2:38:00 PM

    aaww... I like this...sad and bitter...but heartfelt words. Very well written. excellent piece. hope you don't really feel like nothingness...for you are most certainly somethingness :) always, --becca

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:08:00 AM

    Okay so you don't need a pep talk then...:) I have to say, WOW! I've written some pretty sad stuff that really wasn't all that personal but try convincing anyone it's not. Ha ha! This is really very impressive.

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 4:44:00 PM

    I don't believe that so much could come from 'nothingness'... nice work, Dan... Terry

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 12:07:00 PM

    Hi Dan you are certainly somethingless were the pen is concerned my friend, brill loved it, all the best Big O

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 2:31:00 AM

    Look in the mirror Dan ....... what do you see? - ..... a human being, with feelings (?) ........ Smile at yourself in the mirror and tell what you see that you are who you are ... no one is nothing ......... You are Dan .... take care of him, love him ( yourself!) --- SAD! --- (Take care of good friends) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)