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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:24:00 AM
    Hey, this would work well if you could enter your own contest

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:22:00 AM
    Masterful Cyndi--LOL, I did the same thing but I was able to rework it into quatrain--this is a great write !

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 4:37:00 PM
    Oh, Cyndi, I LOVE this! Such a creative (and yes, naughty - but a very classy naughty!) take on Norwegian Wood. The last two lines are priceless. I hope you will consider writing another poem in quatrain form :) In the mean time, adding this to my faves!

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 11:18:00 PM
    I wouldn't have made the connection with Rubber Soul. I enjoyed the read even though I try not to swing with other ding-a-lings. I think wood is a good theme to write about. I am not sure if I have ever seen Norwegian wood, other than possibly a piece of furniture made from Norwegian wood. I see that John....I mean, Rachel, claims to dream of women. Hey, at least this site is still interesting from time to time.

    MacMillan Avatar Cyndi MacMillan
    Date: 2/12/2013 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My intent was to in no way echo the original. :D guess I accomplished that. While Lennon/McCartney were playfully saying nothing happened , I am trying to convey much more happened. Thanks, chum, for taking the time to read and comment. Always appreciated. Staying warm, dry? UGH!!!
  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:57:00 PM
    Read between these lines, chums! Ha! ...and when she was bad she was very bad. ;-)