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Paradise

Timeless space… Moving on… Beauty feels Colorful… Paradise… Forever Grand entry… Hope reaches… No ending
Russell Sivey Entrant into ... Gigno's "Ellip" contest 2/11/2013

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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 9:06:00 PM

    !!!

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 11:28:00 PM

    hey, very nicely done. I prefer the lines going across this way as well!!

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 1:07:00 PM

    This is a great description and beautiful! Thanks for your most gracious and kind words on my poem "A Kiss Upon Your Cheek"....It's non fiction and your comments made me feel so good about my writing! xx Holly Moore

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 8:23:00 AM

    what a great entry for this contest - a big winner for sure

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 1:26:00 PM

    I like "timeless space". That is how I envision it. Awesome write, Russell. Good luck!

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 2:13:00 AM

    well written Russell, good material...well, couldn't do one myself..., good luck in the contest..

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:05:00 PM

    good to see the man himself..charismatic as ever..great entry as always Russell..epic.!!!!

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:30:00 PM

    Dear Russell, I love the purest atmosphere away from this earthly ground, your poem took me to a place were i would be safe from all evil. I truly love the ever-changing background beyond all mountains, sea and blue sky - a wonderful reach of Paradise. enjoyed the haiku.... LINDA