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Below is the poem entitled Fear which was written by poet SHAH JEHAN ASHRAFI. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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Fear came to me on doomsday
From here and there it was running away
I found it odd that fear was so frightened
Usually by harassing others were its days brightened
How did it lose its spark I wondered
I kept fathoming over its new form bewildered
Fear looked too old all of a sudden
In its heart was hidden a bulky burden
It approached me without any hope left
I could feel of intensity it was bereft
Shattered to its core it melted on my threshold
Filled with pity were the emotions I did behold
Fear sobbed with pain and told me its story
Only for some years was it destined to hold glory
It had spent it youth harassing everyone
Meanwhile time was plucking its feathers one by one
Ageing with time, it was reaching its tomb
Fear expressed its wish to have remained in its mother's womb
It breathed its last and I could hear the pin drop silence
The world was given back its right to excellence

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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:49:00 PM

    I agree with Robert, this is a totally new concept for me. You have original ideas Shah. Keep writing.

    ASHRAFI Avatar SHAH JEHAN ASHRAFI Date: 2/19/2013 5:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thnks for your encouragement keep in touch..
  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:15:00 PM

    Wow what a concept! You have given fear a life. Excellent work.

    ASHRAFI Avatar SHAH JEHAN ASHRAFI Date: 2/19/2013 5:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So nice of you..thnks keep in touch