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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 9:29:00 AM
    This was a very intriguing metaphor, I'm impressed the "imagination" of it. Though we all might bicker about the world today and the horrible shape it's in we neglect to remember... the sun is still shining and we're all still alive. Things could be MUCH worse. Definitely deserved the win! :)

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:19:00 PM
    Gail.. Congratulations on your win :-) PD

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:31:00 PM
    Congratulations on your beautiful win Gail

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:10:00 PM
    congrats on your win Gail

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:42:00 PM
    Gail congrats on your win, excellent write...David

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:31:00 PM
    I can only imagine it all, .......because you wrote a poem to take me to all those wonderful sights! Well done, Gail!! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:24:00 PM
    Gail this touched me, the imagery superb. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 1:14:00 PM
    Not surprised to find you here with another inspirational write Gail!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:46:00 PM
    Simply beautiful, Gail! You have such a way with words. The imagery here is outstanding. Congrats on your win in my contest :)

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Gail; This is a beauty of a poem. I close my eyes too, but hope that it always stays the way it is. This is a winner in the contest. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 12:11:00 PM
    Hi Gail welll done like this, even in the dark imagine tyour words will light us up, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:06:00 PM
    Lovely poem Gail, you have me imagining all this, and more, xxx

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 4:52:00 PM
    This is a tremendous and incredible write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fascinating poem this evening! You have created a permanent nighttime, scary in reality, but could be full of permanent dreams, as I dream in the dark! Okay maybe a stretch, but just a thought! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 4:36:00 PM
    Very nice Gail. Good job and good luck