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Imagine

Imagine Imagine if the sky never again was lit by the sunshine Only a galaxy of stars would only exist up high Would they spread enough illuminating light? For us to see the beauty of past skies Imagine if the stars up above suddenly burned out From trying so hard to replace the sunshine back into our eyes Blackness will only be left, eliminating all shades of grey Taking away signs of life that used to exist in the skies Imagine the birds wondering where they will fly to Now that the darkness appears everywhere Will they break their wings not being able to see in their flight? Their freedom taken away from flying in the air Imagine at this moment that this all could become real How would we live in a world that we can no longer see? I close my eyes in darkness and embrace the world today For the earth still seen might someday become a memory Contest: Beatlemania Sponsor: Heather Ober By: Gail Doyle

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 9:29:00 AM

    This was a very intriguing metaphor, I'm impressed the "imagination" of it. Though we all might bicker about the world today and the horrible shape it's in we neglect to remember... the sun is still shining and we're all still alive. Things could be MUCH worse. Definitely deserved the win! :)

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:19:00 PM

    Gail.. Congratulations on your win :-) PD

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:31:00 PM

    Congratulations on your beautiful win Gail

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:10:00 PM

    congrats on your win Gail

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:42:00 PM

    Gail congrats on your win, excellent write...David

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:31:00 PM

    I can only imagine it all, .......because you wrote a poem to take me to all those wonderful sights! Well done, Gail!! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:24:00 PM

    Gail this touched me, the imagery superb. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 1:14:00 PM

    Not surprised to find you here with another inspirational write Gail!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:46:00 PM

    Simply beautiful, Gail! You have such a way with words. The imagery here is outstanding. Congrats on your win in my contest :)

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 7:42:00 AM

    Gail; This is a beauty of a poem. I close my eyes too, but hope that it always stays the way it is. This is a winner in the contest. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 12:11:00 PM

    Hi Gail welll done like this, even in the dark imagine tyour words will light us up, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:06:00 PM

    Lovely poem Gail, you have me imagining all this, and more, xxx

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 4:52:00 PM

    This is a tremendous and incredible write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fascinating poem this evening! You have created a permanent nighttime, scary in reality, but could be full of permanent dreams, as I dream in the dark! Okay maybe a stretch, but just a thought! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 4:36:00 PM

    Very nice Gail. Good job and good luck