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To me: On King David

Did he not seek fervently a heart with his own,
And in that deed unfolded truths and secrets unknown? 
Verily he was divinely appointed and of the Lord known.
In him don't all the great commanders of word take root?
David, like you I hope to write as I should.

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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:24:00 PM

    Itumeleng, today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)

    Lefa Avatar Itumeleng Lefa Date: 2/24/2013 5:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank u very much Linda, I am humbled to know that u liked my piece.
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 12:57:00 AM

    NICE PIECE,,,,INSPIRATIONAL