Flames by Becca Lucas

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/24/2013 9:26:00 AM

I seem to have skipped over this beauty. It's a wonderful thought - to be warmed by someone's inner most feelings. Without that we are only scratching at the surface, only getting a small taste. Not to sound greedy, but I don't want crumbs, I want the pie :) Good work Becca!

Alfred Vassallo

Date: 4/3/2013 12:43:00 PM

Intriguing! Very good indeed.

Caleb Smith

Date: 3/5/2013 8:51:00 AM

Hey, this is cool...and I see you won a contest wit it....Well Done!

frank herrera

Date: 3/3/2013 11:34:00 PM

You're doing Brilliantly!!!

S. K. A. T.

Date: 2/25/2013 7:13:00 PM

Becca' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 2/20/2013 8:43:00 AM

wonderful couplet :) congrats on your win Becca :D - hug, yanny

yasmin khan

Date: 2/20/2013 1:43:00 AM

what a warm write full of passion , congrads on your win Rebecca..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/20/2013 1:38:00 AM

Many congratulations Becca, love the idea of returning compassion xx

Donna Jones

Date: 2/19/2013 8:27:00 PM

The compassion got me! Congratulations

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/19/2013 6:34:00 PM

Congrad's Becca real nice Couplets here! Light & Love Always

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/19/2013 5:15:00 PM

Becca congrats on your win. Loved your poem. Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2013 4:22:00 PM

Becca, love your winning poem in Michael's "boomerang contest" always & forever :-) LINDA

Mystic Rose

Date: 2/19/2013 3:55:00 PM

All good things return to the sender congrats on your lovely write xxx

Ruben O.

Date: 2/17/2013 5:51:00 PM

Soup-Soup!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/16/2013 8:52:00 PM

Sublime! Your rhyming couplets express love and tenderness. A lovely piece! Best wishes, Keith

david scott

Date: 2/12/2013 12:07:00 PM

i like the line reaching your heart in colourful fashion and returning to mine in the form of compassion nice write xxx davidscott

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 2/12/2013 8:08:00 AM

Full of feeling and with the images of words flying as flames and returning as compassion, this is one smashing write, Becca:) Jag

harry horsman

Date: 2/12/2013 7:27:00 AM

this is beautiful Becca, words dance together like the flame...... this is so classical. and the last two lines, also,, sending you soup,, you asked me a question...

ali hammoud

Date: 2/12/2013 6:31:00 AM

Hi, lovely sense of great poetry and affection. I love the expansive skies, I never heard it before! Thanks for sharing with us. TC, Ali

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2013 4:52:00 PM

YES, I think this is one Michael will like for his winnners' list!! Becca, you and I have the ocean in common too. I never really lived very near an ocean, but the few times I was able to visit one, I just adored it. Which beaches have you been to? I got to go to Rio de Janeiro's one time and also a very short Bahama cruise. I know if you went on a cruise it would be the best time of your life.

Becca Lucas Date: 2/11/2013 5:02:00 PM

I think you're right, I'd love a cruise! I go near Tampa Florida.. hang out on Siesta Key... :) I have been three times now and I hope to go every year... it's my most favorite place to be... walking along the beach, playing in the waves.... oh Andrea you have me dreaming now..... :D

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/11/2013 3:39:00 PM

This is very beautiful, I loved how you wrote this poem! A quite intriguing and inspiring write! I enjoyed reading this incredible piece this afternoon! Great Work!!

Becca Lucas Date: 2/11/2013 5:02:00 PM

Thank you Russell! I'm really glad you put your picture for your avatar, it's nice to see who is writing all the nice comments! :)

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