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A hope, a skiff and a load of faith

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A hope, a skiff and a load of faith

Hope creaks like an old wooden boat.
Stepping in there is that sound,
a give as planks groan
under the burden of a new load.
Accepting it on faith,
that it will not sink.
Rocking a bit with the additional weight.
Finding balance as you sit in the skiff.
Picking up the oar, casting off,
a splash of water,
as you take one last look,
you’re off.

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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 2:46:00 PM
    Good one Raskin..' how are you these days??

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:57:00 PM
    Enjoyed this poem - very well done !!! - Have a beautiful Sunday afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 8:59:00 PM
    This kind of brought me a smile..Memories of creaking boats.With hope & faith you still cast off.Very nice write. :o)

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 10:31:00 AM
    like how you have created this wonderful poem, a kin to life i'm sure...

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:29:00 AM
    Very creative metaphor--one keeps going back to check---another mark of good poetry.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 3:49:00 PM
    A provoking and well thought out analogy. It gets me thinking that an old boat really knows what its doing...otherwise, it would have given up.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:33:00 PM
    Yes, hope can get us in there once there faith can keep us there..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara