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Chamber

Isolated by the shield of insecurity
The walls of paradigm unable to break through
Crouched into a small piece
The connecting door locked the border of my sanity

Long gone for the world of sundries
Terminated in limitation of self esteem 
Yearn for the reasonable life to live
Seems like my world is too unkind

Reaching for the air that I thought was empty
Touched by the warm body which seems so alive
I tried to compile my sight
As if it was frosted too long

I find my self in a same room but different color
Someone paint it over upon the abstraction of lame
Rise from the tiring crouch
The hopes sustain me more

Someone paved the veil of angst
Someone who sent by the big owner of love
The one who less than perfect but not least for my room
The chamber of life, the chamber of hopes, the chamber.... is you

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  1. Date: 2/12/2013 8:23:00 AM

    I see your Muse has fully engaged your talented pen. I enjoyed this one very much.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/12/2013 8:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rick, more or less you are the person behind the stage who always bring the inspiring things and encourage me more in achieving my muse, hug yanny :D
  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:14:00 PM

    ..."*.)? Knock Knock, I Brought Your Beauty A Midnight Snack, You Feel Like A Bite, Sweet Baby Girl ?? LOL, I Love Diggg As Enjoy Your Gifted Treasures Beautiful Array In Fascinating Poetry, Beautiful Yanny ~ This Is Completely Amazing; Super Ku's! ~ My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/12/2013 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dear Rachel, missing you here :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:18:00 AM

    Another lovely poem about love, Yanny - Love it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 2/11/2013 10:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne, it is really a pleasure to have you here :D, have a lovely monday :D - hug, yanny