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Fun in the Rain

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Fun in the Rain

There’s a young girl that delights in the rain She wants to play, to fool around within There’s not a better place to run again The field that’s wet, fun’s about to begin She wants to play, to fool around within Nature has ways of bringing some beauty The field that’s wet, fun’s about to begin Nothing has more life than the rain you see Nature has ways of bringing some beauty As the shower allows for fun to come Nothing has more life than the rain you see The girl sure has a lot more fun than some As the shower allows for fun to come There’s not a better place to run again The girl sure has a lot more fun than some There’s a young girl that delights in the rain
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:05:00 PM
    very cute one and nostalgic for me , childhood and rain go together so well. btw, I like your "new" avatar

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:51:00 PM
    Harkens me back to childhood, playing in the rain. It would make a great song. A song of summer rains. It sticks in my mind, your words like a rhyme. An excellent poem. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:36:00 PM
    Pantoums are a very nice form..Enjoyed reading this one today..I bet that girl in last night's downpour would have been cold..If this is for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 6:26:00 AM
    Hi Russel; This is so nice. A girl playing in the rain. I used to like to walk in the rain, once I even took a shower in the rain - with my clothes on. It was fun. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 7:49:00 PM
    It is fun to play in the rain....and this is wonderful

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 6:44:00 PM
    Nice pantoum Russell, it has a great sing song lull to it, it makes me want o put on my rain boots and go sloshing in the rain, great write my friend, love xxx

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 6:14:00 PM
    I've looked at this form before and saw it as very challenging. You carried it out well...enjoyed !!