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Sonnet 8: The Perfect Woman

How many gentlemen have chased your myth?
How many captains and how many kings?
How many have heard of your legend fell?
How many poets and how many priests?
How could they resist your tender mercy?
They'll never deny the world at your feet.

How many gentle ladies dread your myth?
How many mistresses, how many maids?
How many have known your calamity?
How many nurses and how many nuns?
How could they ever dare compete with thee?
They'll never deny the world your beauty.

How many people, both women and men,
Meet the measure of The Perfect Woman?

*I had thought of shortenning this poem to fit in 'The Perfect Woman' competition, but I could not do that without destroying the original vision. A pity I wrote the poem before reading the competition rules! Nevermind, it's all good! mt_dom

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 10:22:00 PM

    Its a grreat poem Michael..I know Michael asked for 12 lines but this is an exceptionally good sonnet so you should enter it...i rate this very high and the best entry I have read so far.

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 2/17/2013 3:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your comment Yasmin, it means a lot to me. :-) Submitting now.
  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:33:00 AM

    For me this is already perfect, I love the depth of your words :D they are rich!

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 2/14/2013 9:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yanny...thank you.