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Autumn Falls

birds on wing
carry the
news headlines 

bold print on
trees turned gold
with loud clues

growing slows
breezes cool
children walk

briskly talk
returning 
to school days

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  1. Date: 5/11/2013 9:19:00 PM

    Joann, stopping by to wish you a happy mother's day... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Good morning, Joann, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful day. Always & Forever! **LINDA**

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 11:43:00 AM

    Beautifully written... I know you've been here a long while... Why so few poems listed?

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 1:20:00 AM

    Hi, I really enjoyed your poem, you have captured so much with so few words its truely impressive. Congrats on being featured.

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 2:37:00 PM

    ok, here it is, the only one of the three I had not seen yet before today. Nicely done! school day start is around my birthday time!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:15:00 PM

    Joann congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:45:00 AM

    You have captured so much of Fall in these few lines. That is talent !! Congrats on your placement !!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:29:00 AM

    Lovely work..congrats. BG

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:17:00 AM

    Congratulatins on this wonderful write

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 3:01:00 AM

    Lovely little write, nice use of imagery.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:58:00 AM

    Congrats on your HM Joann I am envious of all those that tried this and placed xx

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 3:23:00 PM

    nice words up there,,,,and it won ;}

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 12:01:00 PM

    Congratulations on a very fine win, Joann. Annalise

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 10:11:00 AM

    Joann, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 3:31:00 AM

    Perfect picture of autumn painted here, Joann...congratualations! - Tim

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:57:00 PM

    Warmest congrats on this super win Joann.

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 11:16:00 AM

    Enjoyed your thoughts on FALL...Beautifully Expressed!1

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:31:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this one today..Great contest entry..Sure to be in the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:35:00 PM

    i had not heard of the ellip form before, but I like it. Brief verses rather like haiku, but fewer restrictions.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 4:27:00 AM

    these are excellent Joann

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 12:47:00 PM

    Exceptional, in wording and imagery. Take care!

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 12:22:00 PM

    This is a perfectly masterful Ellip contest entry my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a wondrous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 11:24:00 AM

    You manage to speak volumes with the economic use of the words. Perhaps echoing the autumn heralding winter - where we withdraw into our cozy nook. It read as a "haiku-like" string - Love it!