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Supannika
the very first time I saw you
you totally captivated my heart
never had any idea or single clue
but I’m already in love with you since the start
just your name is such a beauty without a doubt
I could hardly believe that you’re real
until I’ve finally touched and held you one by one
falling down from those wand-like branches as in hail
carpeting the dark green bermuda grasses on the ground
with all my zest I gathered you gladly all around
your big round petals shine so bright like a brilliant sun
my faint notion that you’re a hand-made crepe paper
now has passed its way and finally gone
all I wish, when I dance you’ll adorn my hair
I’ll be proudly making you into garlands for a special affair
in my eyes, you’re one of the emblems of royalty
in this beautiful kingdom and lovely place
while local and foreign folks are all enjoying their stay
you’re providing them an atmosphere with solace
in your yellow color is a shaft of light for peace
Supannika, with my piquancy I am taking you home
to introduce you that you’re such a special kind
a radiant flower to float on water will lastly bloom
most especially I’ve a great idea in my mind
you’ll be a wonderful gift to my love one/s on Valentines
Written: Feb. 10, 2012
Note:
It's my first try of a quintain form of poem as I'm so inspired by the fantastic beauty of the Supannika flower. I hope I did the form, "quintain" right.
SUPANNIKA :I didn’t give up asking/searching its name when I first saw it at the camp site during my 3 days/nights stay (Feb. 6-8, 2012). I've also checked the spelling of its name at google. It is a very beautiful, big brightly yellow colored flower full of petals which I’ve only seen here in my borrowed country. Its picture is my avatar. I love yellow flowers so much; yet. this is one of the most beautiful yellow flowers i've seen. So in love with this pretty flower ;)))
Supannika for You! Wishing You All My Dear PS Poet Friends an Advance Happy, Happy Valentines Day!
Second Place
Contest: Simple Title
Judged: 3/9/13
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