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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:59:00 PM
    !!! Congrats on your great win..((())),,,/Sara

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Wow, really amazing imagery in this one! I especially love your second haiku. That pretty much sums up my neighbourhood right now! Congrats :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:20:00 AM
    This is a lovely spring write with great imagery and wonderful vocabs. Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:54:00 PM
    A beautiful gem Craig! Spring is quite near and your wonderful poem brings it even closer... Congratulations on your very fine win. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 5:45:00 PM
    Oh wow! You gave all of nature such human qualities.....only more perfect that we as humans, could ever be...just beautiful is this poem of spring!! What a rainy day brightener this is!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 4:21:00 PM
    I just knew this would be a winner. CONGRATS to you.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 3:16:00 PM
    So many wonderful poems in this contest. Nicely written Craig. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 1:32:00 PM
    Well done !! Spring and the earth's womb... Congrats on your win and really nice haiku in this !! Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:06:00 AM
    Wonderful how you have drawn parallels between spring and the originating new life. Congrats Craig!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:41:00 PM
    Craig, ;-) Congratulations with your nice winning poem in Debbie's "Spring haibun" contest... xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:06:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. [soup mail] Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:50:00 PM
    Congratulations Craig :-)

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 9:59:00 AM
    superb write my friend Craig...very creative. I like it. Congratulations on your win. Cheers!! (^_^) Love, maria

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 8:24:00 PM
    An excellent write, Craig! I enjoyed the vivid imagery you used throughout the poem. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 10:08:00 AM
    This is a marvelous write my dear friend, Craig! I love it and the form! thank you so much for sharing and my biggest congratulations on your fantastic win! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 12:57:00 AM
    Hi congratulations Craig, this is a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 9:26:00 PM
    Congratulations Craig....:-)

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 8:40:00 PM
    CRAIG, your poem is amazing, love your thoughts on the topic "SEEDS" for this contest... goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 8:16:00 PM
    congrats' SandyIvy

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:11:00 AM
    haiku #1 nice to see the gramtical connection with 2 phrases! YES you can do this ;)..yet line 3 is cause and effect..thing of something else which you haven't already referred to in lines 1 &2, #2 what is the subject? what is shrinking? #3 line 3 makes no sense, remember stay OBJECTIVE only TELL what you actually precieve through your senses, the object of a haiku is to make folks FEEL what you felt..not think what you thought..I hope that helps let me know when to re check L & L

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    Date: 2/12/2013 6:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hear ya--now let's see!