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Love died, so did I

Once again 
Love has died
So did I

No one cares
About me
No one cries

No one there
By my side
No comfort

Simple tears
Tears of pain
My last ones

Touched by death
Closed my eyes
Say goodbye

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:14:00 PM

    belated congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:19:00 AM

    I like this even though it is very sad. congrats. BG

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin Date: 3/5/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:10:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win with this most heart rending ellip! Love it! lori

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin Date: 3/5/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:50:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Julie xx

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin Date: 3/5/2013 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:11:00 PM

    So very sad !! I'm sure someone cares. Strong raw voice in your ellip. Congrats on your placement

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin Date: 3/5/2013 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 3/4/2013 12:00:00 PM

    Congratulations on a very fine win, Julie. Annalise

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin Date: 3/5/2013 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 3/4/2013 10:10:00 AM

    Julie, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin Date: 3/5/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you