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Panic

crawls back
into a bud

from a fog
holding a lifeline,

devastator 
screaming

clad in agony 
and moss

like a maid
losing her breast.

It reveals 
its purpose

and drives.
The clouds

Are budding.
It stands

despite all loss
and vanishes like smoke. 

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  1. Date: 2/11/2013 9:44:00 PM

    Laura, i love the way you introduced panic on it's own pitch and perceptive stands. xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 7:34:00 PM

    ‡ I Diggg This Ofttimes Muse It's Genre In Excellent Verse, Sweet Beautiful Laura, Which Your Beauty Seems Sooo Gifted At Brushing ˜ Mrs. Poe, Would Be Quite Fitting Unto Your Precious Creative Heart; Truly ˜ Crimson And Clover, Over And Over, But, Tis Merely An App Leading Us To That Yellowbrick Road ˜ Keep Swirling The Sweet, Beautiful Girl! ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel * Ps., This Poe, Two Thumbs Up And A Shake; Super Ku's *

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal Date: 2/11/2013 7:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Poor Mr. Poe! It does not help that I am such a downer as well! --awww, thanks Rachel! You are very uplifting...I appreciate your visit.
  1. Date: 2/10/2013 3:09:00 PM

    This could be great depicted on a canvas Laura - this work of yours is akin to free-association which is a very rewarding method of expression - when I first began making literature I would compose mostly from my subconscious, developing a stronger sense of soul, making love to the concepts, forms of our language itself - it was so much fun and so cryptic - I continue to do so - I respect and enjoy your roving of styles - J.A.B. %