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Shadows In My Mind

Darkness brings the shadows
Of places I have been
Memories loom in corners
Rattling in the wind
Sometimes whispers haunt me
Never letting go
Race across the star shine
Answers left unknown
Reaching blindly through the night
Someone to hold close
Only to find vapors
Drifting down like tears
Shadows never listen
'Till the morning light
Then I'll follow sunrise
Far into my mind

Then I'll follow sunrise

                          Far into my mind




02/09/13

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  1. Date: 4/3/2013 8:32:00 PM

    I really enjoyed reading this. Great work :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:41:00 AM

    so deep..it cuts like aknife..going to my favs

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 7:57:00 AM

    Such sadness James, these always reach deep inside to be savored; I think the emotion speaks to many of us on some level. So special! :)

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 10:13:00 AM

    Good write my friend.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 3:29:00 PM

    Wow! This is awesome! I love this poem, James! ...and you know what happens...into my favs! : )

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 11:46:00 AM

    Jimbo I have to fav this one. Awesome Big hug. Deb

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:51:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your creative work today...I am glad that I chose this one to read..Sara

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:30:00 PM

    I loved this write, excellent piece and this was my most favorite descriptive sentence (Someone to hold close Only to find vapors Drifting down in tears)

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 9:25:00 PM

    This is great..sad..the first few lines capture the reader...well done. BG