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Sometimes in relationships

Sometimes in relationships our love defeats our lust, but sometimes not;
Sometimes in relationships our peace is kept by trust, but sometimes not.

Sometimes in relationships we, each to each, are hurt and held and healed;
Sometimes in relationships we share our heart and mind, but sometimes not.

Sometimes we are lost lovers, our lives blaze with brighter bursts of passion;
Sometimes we are best friends, we balance with compassion, but sometimes not.

Sometimes we are up-in-arms night and day, our battles are fought and won;
Sometimes we are at-loose-ends and struggle to be one, but sometimes not.

Sometimes we are with others, together we entertain family;
Sometimes we are you and me; two is good company, but sometimes not.

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  1. Date: 5/12/2013 9:20:00 AM

    Wow, Michael. This has to be one of the most well captivating ghazals I've read. It isn't an easy form, but you did with ease and skill. Surprised to see so few comments on this gem... going straight to my faves!

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 5/13/2013 1:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Timothy, you do me great honor. Thank you.
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 8:54:00 PM

    wow just great..am new here plz comment on my poems.need your views

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 2/17/2013 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Shah, will do...soonest. Cheers!