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Nature in the mix

daffodils---
spring blossoms
happy smiles

periwinkles
blue attire---
blaze like stars


the black hole
grave yard for stars
no headstones---
~*~

2/09/13
Note:  For Gigno's Ellip Contest ( Listed under Haiku Form)

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  1. Date: 3/11/2013 3:02:00 PM

    love these - especially the black hole

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:13:00 PM

    belated congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 3:13:00 PM

    What a last verse, what a title, what a poem, Annalise!...by the way, I LOVE your first name...My sister's name is Lise...Congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:14:00 AM

    Way to go on the contest...and dido on the last stanza!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:17:00 AM

    Tis is just geat..congats .. love how you took to t a unexpected place. BG

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:05:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win with this awesome ellip Annalise! Lori

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:50:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Annalise, i couldn't come up with anything for this one, and I am glad I didn't try seeing how good they all were xx

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:28:00 PM

    Awesome talent :-). Congratulations

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:00:00 PM

    Love these and that last one is just over the top !! Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 1:58:00 PM

    I love the last one best. :-) Congrats on your win in the Ellip contest. Love, Su

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 10:10:00 AM

    Annalise, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:08:00 AM

    Sweet poem. Congrats on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:56:00 PM

    Warmest congrats on this super win Anna.

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:23:00 PM

    congrads on your win Annalise..

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:22:00 AM

    I really enjoyed your haiku's....all of them were very well written and vivid....thanks for your comments..xx Holly Moore

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:22:00 PM

    very nice haiku Annalise...I like the celestial references...hugs

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:01:00 PM

    I like all of these, very creative, but WOW, that last one is amazing.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 4:04:00 PM

    ‡ 'Daffodils, Spring Blossoms, Happy Smiles,' Tis My Most Favourite In Your Fragrant Beauty's Trilogy Of Haikus, Sweet Beautiful Amazing Annalise ˜ Spring Is Such An Invigorating Wonderful Time As Heart's Do Blossom; A Pollunating Within Their Spirits ˜ A Butterfly Her Cocoon Sunshine And, Love's Moon ˜ 'The Black Hole,' Stars Are Borne While We Blink Our Eyes And Not A Sparrow Falls; We Kiss Her Dove, With Joy She Fly's ˜ You Are Beautiful And Your Visit, As Beautiful As You And, 'Yesss!' ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 2:07:00 PM

    Oh these are so good....

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 6:09:00 PM

    !!!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 10:29:00 PM

    i love those periwinkles and daffodls dear.Great haiku indeed.Have a blessed wkend

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 3:54:00 PM

    Wow!! This poem is magnificent. Thanks for sharing this gem. Hugs and luv, Gail