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About This Poem

Ellip Contest

babbling brook
poetry
in motion

plant a seed
earth is moist
love must grow

smile on face
big secret
not sharing

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  1. Gigno Avatar
    ... Gigno
    Date: 2/28/2013 8:37:00 PM
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    !!! = shorthand for excellent

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/4/2013 1:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Think i forgot to enter in contest, ah well another time.
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/28/2013 10:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dont understand, can you explain
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/26/2013 2:37:00 PM
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    wow..this is a nice poem..pd

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/26/2013 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you PD
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    Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/9/2013 2:59:00 PM
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    Nicely done Seren, loved the concept .... good luck in the contest

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/26/2013 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanking you Mehnaz
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    David Williams
    Date: 2/9/2013 12:52:00 PM
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    Seren very cool write...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/26/2013 3:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 2/9/2013 12:23:00 PM
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    This is a wonderful write my friend! I loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! You have entered a perfect entry into the contest! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/26/2013 3:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Russell
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    Donna Jones
    Date: 2/9/2013 11:19:00 AM
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    Very nice..I really loved the first verse...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/26/2013 3:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Donna
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/9/2013 10:52:00 AM
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    I really like how you did this contest, Seren. I should think this one would wow the judge! By the way, I left you two soupmails!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/26/2013 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea
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    harry horsman
    Date: 2/9/2013 8:23:00 AM
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    these are amazing Seren, so visual...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/9/2013 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/9/2013 6:40:00 AM
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    Nicely done, Seren! - Love your art in your blog. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/9/2013 7:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Anne Lise for the compliment...Seren
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 2/9/2013 1:35:00 AM
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    Hi Seren great haiku's love thoughts esopecially that babbling brook, all the best Owen

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/9/2013 2:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Owen , first time to try an ellip just followed contest instructions, i hope.


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