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The Perfect Woman


She is intelligent and sensitive 
Has boundaries yet permissive 

She loves people, nature and pets
She is time aware, yet never frets

She is laborious in her travail 
Her truth and honesty prevail 

She is beautiful but not showy 
Quick to praise, angers slowly

She can follow or take the lead
Always there if you’re in need

She is in touch with her femininity  
The yin and yang of masculinity

February 8, 2013


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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 4:53:00 PM

    You described a selfless woman with abundant humilty...what type of woman is more beautiful and perfect than such a woman? Nicely done!

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 2:05:00 PM

    Well, you should just have named this great write, Mystic Rose - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 11:00:00 PM

    this is wonderful for the perfect woman contest. Love that yin and yang of it !!!

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 5:57:00 AM

    Rose; This is another perfect write from you. I loved it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 9:01:00 AM

    Yours is real good too! I fact they share some similarities.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:27:00 AM

    Thank you for your kind comment on "a night alone" I love "the perfect woman". In essence my "a night alone" is about the struggle to find her and I would agree, "the perfect woman" would be, in many ways, as you describe. I don't post or participate on here much because time does not allow but will aim to more so. Take care x

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 7:15:00 PM

    Who could ignore a title like this!! Very well done! I think you have all the bases covered, and I would certainly agree with you. Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 7:06:00 PM

    Good luck in the contest....Thanks for your comment..........rick

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 4:03:00 PM

    ............................. ‡ Ps., Thank You, For Your Heavenly Beauty's Kind Warm Visit, Sweet Beautiful Amazing Vienna ˜ Also, I Believe Amid Part That I Shall Be Changing My Poetics Muse From, Fragrant Petals In Velvets Love, Unto, Sheer Brutality Which Is Of The Utmost Necessity Whilein Addressing The Power Brokers In This Their Poisoned Playground Called Planet Earth, LOL. ˜ Stay Beautiful Beautiful Girl! ˜ My Love Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 3:57:00 PM

    Very Nice words Rose ...Seren

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 3:51:00 PM

    ‡ This Has Got To Be, 'You, Sweet Beautiful Vienna!' ˜ I Love Love Love, The Beauty In Femininity, Although I Also Admire The Strength Of Heart Which Yesss, Is The Only Way It Seems That A Gentle And Loving Soul Can Sustain As Forging Onward Through To One Day Rise Above, The Valley Of Woe And Its Age In Definings Formful Flames ˜ 'Subdivisions,' In The High School Halls In The Shopping Malls; Live At Five ˜ A Painting Of Beauty, Marked For Faves! ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 3:49:00 PM

    Wish this were me! Nicely done....good luck

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 2:24:00 PM

    Hmmmmm ......... then I have a lot to work with - Well written. - Have a lovely weekend M.R. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 2:01:00 PM

    I feel that you fit this poem very nicely my friend! Did you mean to describe yourself or was that just a sub-conscious thing? This is a beautiful write, I loved reading this glorious poem this afternoon! What a spectacular piece, Greaet Work!!