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Love - Sweet - Love



                                                       Hand in hand
                                       Sandy beach with beautiful sunset
                                                            in love

                                    
                                       What could be more romantic than
                                    when the sun is glowing red and orange
                                          melts into the sea somewhere
                               And two who are in love and goes hand in hand

                
                                                       A small box
                                        On his knees in the wet sand beach
                                                     Will you be mine

                                             
                                              She blushes as the sunset
                                                Smiles her lovely smile
                                                        Yes, I would


                                          The sun melts into the sea somewhere
                                    But for a couple in love, the night is still young





08.02.2013
A-L  Andresen :)
("mix poem" )

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  1. Date: 5/22/2013 12:28:00 PM

    This charms me no end, anne... a way of sweet passion drifts accross the page... a most woderfu; write as always..:) huggs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/22/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 11:39:00 AM

    Beautiful poem, Anne. I enjoyed it. My name is Jiril Clemons. Check out some of my poetry, you might like it.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/22/2013 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jiril. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 4:04:00 AM

    Yes , this is a lovely poem. The sunset is so warming to vow of devotion

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2013 4:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Stacey. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/18/2013 8:31:00 AM

    lovely poem, sounds so sweet :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/18/2013 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Danielle. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 6:35:00 AM

    Love it, so sweet and warms your heart! My kind of poem, thanks for sharing!oxoxo Elaine

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/13/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Elaine. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 4:32:00 PM

    love it Anne - Lisa,,,, don't know how I've missed this gem,,,,thank you for reading my Caturday haiku's, you have an awesome weekend xo's ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/13/2013 3:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/8/2013 6:41:00 AM

    love at it best. :) Love it

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/8/2013 6:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sasha. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 3:08:00 PM

    Simply beautiful. :-)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/21/2013 3:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, AE S-K. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 12:20:00 PM

    I enjoy reading your work and I learn from them Tank you for that and for your wonderful comments. Tac

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2013 12:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 9:28:00 PM

    hi hi hi my sweetest Poetess dearest Anne Lise :) i love this piece so much :) so romantic <3 and yes so beautifully written :) thank you for sharing <3 <3 <3 :) Sk

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/13/2013 2:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sukmawati. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 4:51:00 PM

    nicely done poet. Hey if you have time look at a new poet Margherita Russo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2013 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sean. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:50:00 PM

    I have always been a romantic at heart. I love the way you put this together and I do love a plan that comes together. Great write Anna-lise God Bless. Dave.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2013 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Dave. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 12:04:00 PM

    So lovely !! Sweet romance at it's best...love it!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:19:00 PM

    I will defo wait for the sun to glow red and orange when I wanna prop.... lol That was a great poem.... My favourite in deed.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2013 2:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Chuma. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 1:44:00 AM

    i love this its so amazing:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/18/2013 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 8:59:00 AM

    A beautiful verse for my early morning read...Love really can be joyful! Cynthia

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/17/2013 11:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Cynthia. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 11:08:00 PM

    This is evoking a freshness of love affairs harmonizing with nature's kind act. Thanks for sharing this. (^_^)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/16/2013 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Noel. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 10:50:00 PM

    gosh, it also almost looks like that beatlemania contest too. Didn't they have a song called love sweet love? Good stuff, sweetie!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/16/2013 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Andrea. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:31:00 PM

    Oh the is just beautiful...it has so much emotion and imagery. Good job! Thanks for your comments and always thinking about me..xxoo Holly Moore

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/16/2013 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Holly. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:42:00 AM

    It's a true magic poem certainly many will remind back, no chance to deny. Thanks my sweet friend for your comment. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/15/2013 11:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:48:00 AM

    Awwwwww....how sweet and romantic and dreamy! :) Love ya! Thanks for the encouragement you give to me always! God bless you for it! :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/15/2013 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:53:00 AM

    Very romantic, Anne Lisa - the sand, the beach, two lovers and the sun melting into the sea. By the way, happy Valentine's Day. Love, daver

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/14/2013 12:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Daver. - Happy V-Day ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:17:00 AM

    Well written. I like it. xoxox Isaiah Zerbst :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/14/2013 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Isaiah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 4:40:00 AM

    Took me away...sooo deep ...beautiful write...thanks :-)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/14/2013 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, W.C. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 3:51:00 AM

    Love - Sweet - Love, no wonder. The title defines the poem itself. a very sweet insightful poem. Loves it

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/14/2013 3:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Daniel. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 5:46:00 PM

    ,,,ahhh this is so sweet and beautifully written ..my dearest Valentine.. Anne Lise... i love your poems so much <3 <3 <3 Happy Valentine dear <3 Hugs and love :) Sk

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/14/2013 1:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Sukmawati. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:08:00 PM

    Ah, Ann Lise, this is lovely! Perfect for Valentine's Day. I love the last line, best! Guess what?! we had a little bit of sunshine yesterday which lasted for about 2 hours before the clouds came in...today, zero sunshine and we're expecting snow! The warmth from your poem will help our minds focus on warmer days to come. Great job. Love, Annalise

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/14/2013 1:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Annalise. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 4:26:00 PM

    Lovely valentine piece. J

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/13/2013 1:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 3:06:00 PM

    Aww...How sweet. <3

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/13/2013 1:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Dan. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 11:22:00 AM

    Hello Anne Lise Anderson, I like your beautiful poem. Also thank you for your comments on my poem and also the time taken to read my poem.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/12/2013 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mya, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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