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The Perfect Woman

I‘ll never find a perfect woman,
Than the one I have.
Tranquil my heart all moments,
Pompous me real then and next!
Kind, patient and supportive,
Strong, courageous and classy,
I paid a little dowries to have her.
Two male goats and a drum of brew
She never akin to that lone,
But wasn't Lucas’ ever!
For the clan and family sought,
As appreciation for perfect woman!

© Lucas Mkude. 
07/02/2013

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  1. Date: 2/9/2013 3:27:00 AM

    It's camels and dates here in Arab countries,the dowries I mean.....that was ages back, but I think it still exists in certain clans.... Well done Lucas ,, good luck in the contest..

    Mkude Avatar Lucas Mkude Date: 2/9/2013 4:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh! very nice Mehnaz.. not very far from us. Thanks for your comments and wishing me luck in the contest friend. Be blessed!
  1. Date: 2/8/2013 7:21:00 PM

    ENJOYED YOUR POEM LUCAS xxx

    Mkude Avatar Lucas Mkude Date: 2/9/2013 12:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANX VERY MUCH xxx
  1. Date: 2/8/2013 5:53:00 PM

    true?? It is interesting to learn of the dowries!! Nicely done for the contest.

    Mkude Avatar Lucas Mkude Date: 2/9/2013 12:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Andrea this is how the dowries are done here. be blessed
  1. Date: 2/8/2013 5:02:00 PM

    I'm glad you found your perfect woman...happiness always

    Mkude Avatar Lucas Mkude Date: 2/9/2013 12:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Donna! A perfect woman real brings happiness always.