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Lace and Frills

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Lace and Frills

All around me I see folks are glad as can be
'Tis the season when glad hearts are beating
But surely you know, somewhere deep down below
There are hearts that are wounded and bleeding

See the cards go around, while the red hearts abound
Some are decked out with lace bows and cotton
But I haven't a one, I have missed all the fun
I am left all alone and forgotten

I had hoped for a card, yes, I hoped really hard
Just for one tiny note with a heart
Only three little words and I'd sing with the birds
Or I'd suck on a lemon that's tart

But I had me a plan, to the paper I ran
To the hearts and the lace and the cotton
And I made up some frills for some young pretty girls
That by others and me were forgotten

~ Feb 7, 2013~
~ For the Forgotten Valentine contest by Debra Squyres ~
~ 12.10.12.10 metre ~

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  1. Date: 2/15/2013 3:03:00 PM

    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon..Did you really do this for some special ladies?...Thanks for stopping by..I hope that I will be able to do a little yard work this year..Maybe a little bit at a time until I get my flower beds weeded or maybe hire some help..Sara

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:12:00 AM

    Lovely write!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 8:54:00 AM

    sentimental and sweet...very sweet with an eye catching title

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 6:56:00 PM

    Love the rhyming style and meter as it's one I use a lot, too. Good stuff, partner!

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 5:18:00 PM

    More forgotten than not I think! Wonderful.....good luck

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 2:17:00 PM

    i like the sentiment in this poem and the way you've expressed it. i always feel bad for those who don't get valentines on this holiday, so i love your plan...