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Down Fall

Within the warmth of home, I sit amazed
at the gentle fall of snow through window pane.
Cup of tea in hand, my layered thoughts unchain,
and tumble from the tip of tongue unfazed
to land upon a pristine page appraised,
aided by the silent fall through snowy pane.
Oh, the soft white wintry glow 'pon the lane
leaves a graceful drape, Lord be praised.

Within the warmth of home, I muse on themes 
of days to come and those gone bye and so,
I thank the Lord for all of nature's schemes,
for the gift of time, for peace, and for the snow. 
Oh, make the blanket deep, I wish to dream,
may all my days and 'morrows have this glow.

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  1. Date: 7/10/2013 1:45:00 PM

    No other words, just BEAUTIFUL!!

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 10:16:00 PM

    Dear Light and LOVE,Deborah, Congratulations on YOUR Winning POEM " Down Fall " in the Contest "One of YOUR Greatest Days" Sponsored by Dan Kearley. A well deserved win. I just got back into the Cabin Sat. and read This MasterPiece during the LAST Snow storm of the season. It made me feel extra Good. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:28:00 PM

    Debbie, your poem is just beautiful, what a lovely way and day! Congratulations with your amazing poem, always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 9:53:00 AM

    Congrats Debbie :-)

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 9:25:00 PM

    Beautiful and lovely piece,Debbie..Great job..Congrats on your superb win in this contest for I`m not amazed....HAhaha!light and love....check your soup mail..

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 7:57:00 PM

    So very beautiful Debbie. I am impressed. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 6:05:00 PM

    Congrats on your great winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 1:00:00 PM

    Debbie beautiful penned words. Makes winter sound so cozy. A great poem. Congratulation on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:42:00 PM

    Debbie, CONGRATULATIONS in Deb's contest!!! ;-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 10:44:00 AM

    The beauty of winter will soon be gone! But, you have left us with the memory of her beauty!

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 9:59:00 AM

    Congrats on your win... It depicts the perfect snowy day in which to inspire writting.

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 9:11:00 AM

    There is such a serenity and peaceful quality that makes me want to curl up beside you under the warmth of your hospitality! Loved this from you! (I'll take a little lemon in my tea if you don't mind! ) :) Congrats Debbie!!

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 8:52:00 AM

    I remember this one,Debs, and how much I loved it the first time. it's not amazing to me that you got on the top three of this amazing contest!! congrats

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 7:21:00 AM

    Sounds lovely! Congratulations Debbie.

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 7:07:00 AM

    You evoke a feeling of utter peace and contentment with this jeweled poem, congrats on your beautiful write and success. xxx

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 5:16:00 AM

    I love this one....congrats on your win

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 3:40:00 AM

    This poem is a fabulous insight into the inspirations beheld by a grateful artist :-) Just.....beautiful <3 Thanks for sharing :-)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:43:00 AM

    You are such an artist with words and images!! This is surely a favourite!!

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 2:32:00 AM

    This is great!! Its very wintery where I am, very fitting. I enjoyed this poem over a hot cup of coffee, watching the snow fall here at 1am, thanks for posting :) GypsyofEssence

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 6:13:00 AM

    Painting with words on the canvas of Winter! Beautiful!

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:26:00 PM

    : ) I imagine His smile during the moments you spent writing this, Deb. Simply beautiful! Thanks for all your support and visits, Deb. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 2:51:00 PM

    Very nice. I like this form, a bit different than the English sonnet. I need to learn a bit more about its other conventions, like the "premise" and the "turn". Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 2:26:00 AM

    sweet and mushy love it .xx

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 12:42:00 AM

    I guess there is no place like home Debbie, this brings a warm glow to the page..! I will take this opportunity to wish you a happy Valentine's day..! P/S thanks for the comment."

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 8:36:00 PM

    this is just beautiful.....the poem labelled sestina is really a Tritina for Andrea's contest.....It was labelled such as part of the contest rules....thanks for sharing...

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 7:29:00 PM

    My heart has been warmed by this beautiful write, Debbie. Such depth and serenity and peace it portrays that one cannot help but be touched to the core! God bless! Thanks for your encouraging post. It means so much to me! Hugs!

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 11:48:00 AM

    Ahhh..........wish I could sit at your window, with a steaming cup, and see what you are seeing! What a lovely uplifting poem!!

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 11:37:00 AM

    What a marvelous poem. The kind of winter in Utah.

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:17:00 AM

    Snow falling is truly amazing. Time, peace, snow, we all have a lot to be thankful for. It is amazing how the Lord sends us little blessings that sometimes we miss.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:13:00 PM

    wow, an Italian sonnet. How many of those have you tried now? This is really nice one, Debs. I know you got stuck inside the other day and you took that time to create this gorgeous reminder of the event. Write ON.