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dirtiest demon dining

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dirtiest demon dining


it's

a hunger

that thrives
on

momentary lapses
of reason

a 
split second starvation..

sound 
stealing 
stimulant

I

finally have possession 
of you..

So I
sit here and 
watch you sleep
while

Satan softly serinades
the air..
So

you can dream
as I scheme
on

how to keep you

another shot of
comfortably numb

sung by the bottle
humming a hostle lullaby..

i'm
out of my mind

Moaning the 
sweetest disowning
knowing

you belong in first.
but
for what it's worth
Tonight 
you have met

the dirtiest demon
dining
on

 
"But, there's gotta be a way
i can get her to stay"




let us prey

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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 12:14:00 AM
    Yes you definitely were on track with the comment. If I combined two of your comments, you would be talking about the same person lol. What can I say it's complicated, but I wouldn't have it any other way, ending or beginning. The poem is almost completely literal, hidden by imagined imagery if that's possible lol. Thanks for your lovely comment. I read this poem again and now only see the let us prey line, I think I may have originally missed that cleverness. Great work again.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 5:34:00 AM
    !!!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 12:59:00 AM
    Only those who know can know.

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 9:11:00 PM
    never get enough do we good write rick

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 5:56:00 AM
    I see you're back after a long vacation. I read this already three times, and still feel I'm missing alot. I will get ahold of it though. I just need some rest first. I like the dark vivid images. Welcome back.