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Sublime Exposure

The soul of a gorgeous woman Portrayed by the sublime Facets of her beautiful eyes Perfect body does climb Her body overheats in a flash Colors express their own Delight opens her exposure Displays every light shown She has lost her figure to lust Eyes scope out her being A form of love is before me No stitch of want leaving From behind there is much grandeur Leaking beautiful thoughts Colors bleed from her every pore Nothing that is store bought She exudes this scene of passion Heat enveloped around I suffocate within her form She has surely been found
Russell Sivey A form of Poulter’s Measure

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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:14:00 PM

    This one is going straight to my favorites Russell. This is exceptionally beautiful and touching. Soup Mail.

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:13:00 PM

    I am so glad you still can see the beauty innate in woman. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:11:00 PM

    All I know it is very beautiful and captures you.

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 6:13:00 PM

    An interesting one from you, Russell. I like that you are trying Poulter's measure.

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 3:32:00 PM

    This is a difficult form to do, I enjoyed it, I think it would be a great entry for one of the contests going on right now, about a perfect woman, hopefully you entered it, I believe it's Michael Smiths contest if I'm not mistaken xxx

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 1:57:00 PM

    Very passionate work penned..I see you tried the Poulter's measure..Good job..Thanks for stopping by..We have had a mild winter..Spring plants have been trying to bloom since in December..My Japanese Magnolia(Tulip Tree) has had blooms to get killed three times for it would warm up and they open then it would drop down into the upper twenties..My Star Magnolia has suffered the same fate..The Daffodils bloom but their blooms have not gotten hurt..They can withstand more than some other plants..SK

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 2/7/2013 1:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The Daffodils have a hollow stem which gives them some protection from the cold..Sara
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 12:56:00 PM

    Russell..I could go on reading this forever..you capture the reader's imagination so well...awesome poetry Russell..

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 12:13:00 PM

    Your poem kept me 'cling on' till the last line....a nice write Russell