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Eyes of My Heart

Eyes of my heart,
walking slowly toward me
dressed in crimson, 
your movements both awkward and 
choreographic,
distilled to an essence of intimacy  
in the echo chambers of the erotic,
an inviolate space of possibility,
joining one another in a zone 
deeper than breath.
It couldn’t be any other way. 

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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:18:00 PM

    Well done Jack, enjoyed this romantic piece.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/7/2013 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks... I had a good time writing it.
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 3:38:00 PM

    Beautiful very eloquent with words

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/7/2013 5:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the comment. I enjoyed reading your pieces, and I'm very impressed with how many you posted on your first day. I look forward to reading more in the future. Jack
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:40:00 AM

    This is beautiful Jack

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/7/2013 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kind words... Thank you.