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I asked would somebody please help me I can't stop but NOOO -

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I asked would somebody please help me I can't stop but NOOO -

Oooh, foxy lady!...You make me:
Woozy,
Guzzi
(Will you be my Valentine?)

And OH, how you use me, Ms Tams!...Gettin tired of being mere eye:
Candy,
Mandy

Well, SORRY if that got you angry and stressed...Relax! Have a warm glass of:
Brandy,
Mandy

Again, Ms Richards: As a movie buff, I'm sure you've seen the 1962 Japanese classic:
Hari
Carrie

What? You haven't seen it?...Well go down and rent it! Why do you:
Tarry,
Carrie?

No wheels, huh? (Sigh) Looks like once again I'm gonna have to drop by and:
Carry
Carrie
(to town to rent her movie...Lord!)

Daver's last name reminds me of a recent trip to Texas where I got hoplessly:
Lost in
Austin

As for the English chap across the pond who invented this form, I can just hear:
Brian
Sighin'
(and shaking his head in disgust)

You're still an amateur-O!...You're poetry remains un:
Proven,
Ruben

YES, you're talanted Ms MacMillan but you DO go on at times and can be rather:
Windy,
Cyndi
(You're not gonna hurt me AGAIN, are you Cyndi?...Ruben has already severely injured me and now you too?)

A rumor is circulating that Team PS has (perhaps justifiably) been accused of being:
Souper
Snoopers
(Ouch!...et tu Brute?)

Okay! That's it and why are y'all so GROUCHY today?..

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  1. Date: 3/2/2013 5:59:00 AM
    A frolicking footle.....fun, fantastic and freely flipping frightful friends. Well I always say, get it out you will feel better. lol

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:55:00 AM
    You truly are an inventive soul!

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 10:56:00 AM
    LOL! I agree with you, my humble poems remains unproven! ...but I'll keep trying! : )

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 5:20:00 PM
    This is so much fun! Very well done.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 3:19:00 PM
    Tim , Tim, come out, come out of that steep dive you are in, ha ha ha. love them....David

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:17:00 AM
    You are a pleasure to read:)..We must find one for you Mr footle:)

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 2:28:00 AM
    LOL with delight Tim.Love your Marianne Moore twist with your note to each footle.A nice development to the formRgds Brian

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 7:56:00 PM
    :-)...PD

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:01:00 PM
    Ha ha! Tim, you are just asking for trouble, aren't you! This was an entertaining series of footles for me to read(about the last footle....I've heard the same thing. More than once. Shhh! :D).

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 6:51:00 PM
    Cute as can be, Tim!!! I sure enjoyed this set!!! Great creativity.

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 3:07:00 PM
    very clever and creative! i enjoyed this one very much!

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:58:00 AM
    ha you used me twice me thinks, have i upset you somehow lol brandy on you I think xx

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:48:00 AM
    :) i have my smile back while reading your cutest poem dear friend Tim..so stunning write..and enjoyed it so much ..have your wonderful day dear friend Tim :) Sk

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:45:00 AM
    Funny funny funny.......

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:11:00 AM
    ha! more fun ones! love 'em :)