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The Perfect Woman


                                    Perfect woman is
                          one who changed myth to mrs*.....
                               she wears my gold ring







* Mrs is the title for married women in the UK  (pronounced Misses)

Seren Roberts

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  1. Date: 2/21/2013 2:55:00 PM

    weightless !!! well done Seren xxx

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 3:55:00 PM

    this is one that a "mrs." would enjoy seeing from her husband!! Sweet, Seren.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/13/2013 5:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Andrea ...Seren
  1. Date: 2/8/2013 12:55:00 AM

    I think I'm missing something on this poem, I think. I feel slow lol. I have read it a few times. I will ask my question, soup mail.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/8/2013 2:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Haha will explain to you in soup
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:46:00 AM

    cutesy and so good my friend xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/7/2013 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy...Seren
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:10:00 AM

    Very simple yet says it all! Great!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/7/2013 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hoped it did?.......Seren
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 6:19:00 AM

    clever and very astute, all boils down to personalities, in the end,,,really like this, the imagery is amazing...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/7/2013 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry....Seren
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 3:58:00 AM

    Star, cute and clever....David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/7/2013 4:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Dafydd, praise indeed....Seren
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 11:28:00 PM

    Excellent! I like it.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/7/2013 4:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Michael
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 9:41:00 PM

    This is a wonderful, a truly glorious write my friend! I am enthralled by the beauty of this incredible poem! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/6/2013 9:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Russell....Seren