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Sickness

Raging inside me, as if I inhaled the sun
I can fell it burning my body
Distorting my mind
No matter how much I drink, I am always thirsty
My body rejects all help
I lay here waiting for my torment to end
Through it all, a vision of an angel
Though I can not see her face
I know she is here to save me

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  1. Date: 2/8/2013 5:57:00 AM

    I'm enjoying your poem - very well written, Taylor! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. -Have a nice weekend, hope the sun will shine on you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Nelson Avatar Taylor Nelson Date: 2/21/2013 5:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the warm welcome, as I write more and find old poems I hope to keep sharing. I hope you have a wonderful year!