Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
 

Hot and Cold

Poet Destroyer A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A  - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Hot and Cold which was written by poet Poet Destroyer A . Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Poet Destroyer A

Best Poet Destroyer A Poems

+ Fav Poet

Hot and Cold

*Hot & Cold*

“The Professional”
only in my eyes
supports
the temperature.
Mercury, rising above:

Boiling point of no return,
Injection,
Rejection,
like heartfelt tears
on the surface,
pouring of dryness
from the the deep
complete.
Bare
Plot
Both 
Dot
Cold
not good enough.

You stay,
Numbness against the impression
of adoration
wallows off
Venus, the frigged interiors of:

Freezing below zero, 
from my form,
Swallow knots
intent look 
nowhere to be found -
in the zeniths
radiation.
Core
Depth
Beauty
Death
Hot
I grasp it all.

The secret of you
I hunger!
Cannot have,
nowhere to be found-
no lease.
Stay…
A kiss so endlessly,
I need!
I want!
endurance
reassurance
your vibes
confused, 
not fixed
your placid
hallucination
during
muddy waters.
And still I may be smitten : -)

By;pd

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
Next>|Last
 
  1. Date: 1/14/2014 7:57:00 AM

    The intensity of extremes here and desire. Be good to hear aloud this one.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 11:00:00 AM

    A lot here P D, wow quite a range of emotion and raw longing, I hope things pan out ok for you, as close to the way you wish them to be.'

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 10:06:00 AM

    Linda This write takes the reader on a roller coaster ride of emotions that are high and low, up and down. Great job Hugs and Love

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 10:22:00 AM

    Just surfed through some poetry today and glad to have found this. The depth of feeling in the turmoil of wanton love is superb ...:)

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 3:40:00 PM

    And I am smitten, PD!

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 3:37:00 PM

    And I am smitten!

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 3:36:00 PM

    And I am smitten!

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 5:51:00 PM

    great and interesting poem I love it Shadow xox

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 8:00:00 PM

    Very nice poem. Glad the monkey sent me.

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 12:22:00 AM

    This flows so well. And the words are so pretty, so evocative. Love it!

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 8:00:00 AM

    Written well.Trez Bien!

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 8:55:00 PM

    PD, lovely poem, very interesting.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 7:36:00 AM

    Your poems are a moveable feast. Stealing the line from Hemingway when he was talking about Paris and how it would never leave him. When I read your poems I am reminded of times that will never leave me. Thank you for touching my life

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 4:31:00 AM

    Life is absolutely hot and cold... Thanks for sharing... Meanwhile, I sympathize with you on your loss.~A.O

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 10:34:00 AM

    Though time passes out but rhythm bears the same whole life. Wonderfully done. Thanks for your your valuable comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 11:24:00 PM

    This is really something wonderful, and carefully written.

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:33:00 AM

    Hi Dark One, I'm still rolling through your back pages. I'm cetainly smitten with this great write. Thank you for the placement in the make you laugh contest, was fun to write and pleased you got a chuckle. Take care, Regards Richard

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 8:59:00 PM

    Earily today you wrote to me and so I return the favor. I wrote something for you it's called smoke on the water and I just posted it for you. tell me what you think.

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 2:47:00 PM

    belatedly thus, am really reassured of the sense of the sight , touch, feelings and unimaginable candor, can't stop myself reading again and, well done good friend loving it it it ------+-----kelechi.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 11:06:00 AM

    Thank you (again) for your thoughtful comments! You are a blessing to fellow soupers! Have a wonderful day! JP

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 8:43:00 PM

    Thanks for your Valentine contests, Pd!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 9:28:00 AM

    I really enjoy and appreciate the way you assemble words. There's structure, but not so much as to constrain; you take advantage of that space. I read, and re-read, this one. J

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:47:00 AM

    this is wonderful

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 2:06:00 AM

    marvellous free verse.Thank you for your kindness.Lov you.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 10:45:00 PM

    Very evocative write as if echoing promises and desires. A lovely read this morning. Thanks PD. (^_^)

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:10:00 PM

    So many emotions greatly expressed...you have a talent! Thanks for your comments and a belated Happy Valentine's Day! xx Holly Moore

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:48:00 PM

    Nicely written! Thank you for always being so supportive PD! :)

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:25:00 PM

    So many heartfelt emotions....if we could only have a binding lease on the one we are smitten with : ) Well done Linda! Happy belated Valentine's day, hope your were treated like a princess xo

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 12:50:00 AM

    searching 4 another sign, sortin pigs out from the swine ...what is a man 2 do ..this time ...buckeroo....love it babe xoxox

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:37:00 AM

    This takes more than one reading to decipher passion, heartbreak, doubt and introspection in every line. As good as it gets! :) Happy Hearts Day, PD!

Next>|Last