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Hot and Cold

*Hot & Cold*

“The Professional”
only in my eyes
supports
the temperature.
Mercury, rising above:

Boiling point of no return,
Injection,
Rejection,
like heartfelt tears
on the surface,
pouring of dryness
from the the deep
complete.
Bare
Plot
Both 
Dot
Cold
not good enough.

You stay,
Numbness against the impression
of adoration
wallows off
Venus, the frigged interiors of:

Freezing below zero, 
from my form,
Swallow knots
intent look 
nowhere to be found -
in the zeniths
radiation.
Core
Depth
Beauty
Death
Hot
I grasp it all.

The secret of you
I hunger!
Cannot have,
nowhere to be found-
no lease.
Stay…
A kiss so endlessly,
I need!
I want!
endurance
reassurance
your vibes
confused, 
not fixed
your placid
hallucination
during
muddy waters.
And still I may be smitten : -)

By;pd

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  1. Date: 5/5/2013 8:55:00 PM

    PD, lovely poem, very interesting.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 7:36:00 AM

    Your poems are a moveable feast. Stealing the line from Hemingway when he was talking about Paris and how it would never leave him. When I read your poems I am reminded of times that will never leave me. Thank you for touching my life

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 4:31:00 AM

    Life is absolutely hot and cold... Thanks for sharing... Meanwhile, I sympathize with you on your loss.~A.O

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 10:34:00 AM

    Though time passes out but rhythm bears the same whole life. Wonderfully done. Thanks for your your valuable comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 11:24:00 PM

    This is really something wonderful, and carefully written.

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:33:00 AM

    Hi Dark One, I'm still rolling through your back pages. I'm cetainly smitten with this great write. Thank you for the placement in the make you laugh contest, was fun to write and pleased you got a chuckle. Take care, Regards Richard

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 8:59:00 PM

    Earily today you wrote to me and so I return the favor. I wrote something for you it's called smoke on the water and I just posted it for you. tell me what you think.

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 2:47:00 PM

    belatedly thus, am really reassured of the sense of the sight , touch, feelings and unimaginable candor, can't stop myself reading again and, well done good friend loving it it it ------+-----kelechi.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 11:06:00 AM

    Thank you (again) for your thoughtful comments! You are a blessing to fellow soupers! Have a wonderful day! JP

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 8:43:00 PM

    Thanks for your Valentine contests, Pd!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 9:28:00 AM

    I really enjoy and appreciate the way you assemble words. There's structure, but not so much as to constrain; you take advantage of that space. I read, and re-read, this one. J

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:47:00 AM

    this is wonderful

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 2:06:00 AM

    marvellous free verse.Thank you for your kindness.Lov you.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 10:45:00 PM

    Very evocative write as if echoing promises and desires. A lovely read this morning. Thanks PD. (^_^)

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 9:10:00 PM

    So many emotions greatly expressed...you have a talent! Thanks for your comments and a belated Happy Valentine's Day! xx Holly Moore

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:48:00 PM

    Nicely written! Thank you for always being so supportive PD! :)

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:25:00 PM

    So many heartfelt emotions....if we could only have a binding lease on the one we are smitten with : ) Well done Linda! Happy belated Valentine's day, hope your were treated like a princess xo

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 12:50:00 AM

    searching 4 another sign, sortin pigs out from the swine ...what is a man 2 do ..this time ...buckeroo....love it babe xoxox

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:37:00 AM

    This takes more than one reading to decipher passion, heartbreak, doubt and introspection in every line. As good as it gets! :) Happy Hearts Day, PD!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 10:58:00 AM

    I finally found my name among your Valentine greetings. Valentine greetings back to you. This poem takes more time than I have right now to decypher but it is all there if I am bright enough to find it. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 8:55:00 AM

    Well written and thought provoking! The words that you have penned made me escape for a moment to indulge upon the memories/secrets that I never shared with anyone Simmplissity=Patricia Lewis

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 7:56:00 AM

    Linda; It is amazing of what you can come up with. It is just like life. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 2:59:00 AM

    nice on this

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 12:54:00 AM

    And another well written piece P D.." I wish you well and also wish you a happy Valentine's day..)

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 6:15:00 PM

    As for, in my arms, has not happened during the past five years, not since our trip across Canada back in 2007, and not going to happen in this life times, but thank you for the lovely thought Linda .

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 6:15:00 PM

    I am afraid that you have me in the dark Linda, for I do not have a clue as to what you mean by “ I sure hope this is for Lisa's "" Bringin' out the " thees and thous!""" contest. ” . As always Linda, thank you for your constant input and for giving us good reading . Unusually Yours B. J. “A” 2

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 6:13:00 PM

    “ I'm wishing this fairy princess, makes it out of the shadows,, and sets herself free ” Me too Linda, and I have to say that the Polish Princess, has loosened up a bit, now that she is the facilitator for her Bruno Groening Circle of Friends, group, but unfortunately, still bound up.

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 4:35:00 PM

    PD, I am just so filled with joy every time I read one of your poems, you honestly touch my soul and I am so, so glad you are still here on the soup. This is nothing short of amazing, but that is nothing knew from you :)

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 11:01:00 PM

    I love your poems is there another way to write to you and say thanks you for your words that you have sent to me I cannot figure out how to write to you just to say thanks.......thanks Randall

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 10:51:00 PM

    love your words and thanks for words to me they help to free me and set my mind at ease Randall

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