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Pain Dissolver

I took the magic pill of life -
My gran and dad were 'live again;
I woke next morning with my wife:
The magic pill dissolved my pain.

For Russell’s Pill of Life contest, 6th February

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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/26/2013 1:55:00 PM
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    Jack, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 2/24/2013 10:11:00 AM
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    Many congratulations Jack xx
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    Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/23/2013 8:16:00 PM
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    So sad Jack, well one ....Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/23/2013 8:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oops i lost my D .....sorry
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    harry horsman
    Date: 2/9/2013 4:12:00 AM
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    very sad Jack, yet excellent poetry...
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    Black Eyed Susan
    Date: 2/7/2013 8:25:00 AM
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    sorry to hear about your wife jack! I like the idea of a pain dissolving pill - one that worked and you never had to take another pill again... good luck in the contest :)
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    Joy Wellington
    Date: 2/6/2013 10:58:00 PM
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    Best wishes for the contest, Jack with this short but lively piece. One love, Joy Wells
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 2/6/2013 9:05:00 PM
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    Another very good entry for the contest, Jack...my best wishes for the Winners' List! Great job. Always, Annalise
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    Donna Jones
    Date: 2/6/2013 6:00:00 PM
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    Very very nice. Good luck...
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/6/2013 3:23:00 PM
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    oh my, you put it personally and I think it is one of the BEST I have seen in his contest. So much better than my stupid sonnet I wrote. I hope it scores high, my friend and I hope you recover from the emotional pain. Luv, Andrea
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    ilene bauer
    Date: 2/6/2013 2:32:00 PM
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    very good poem - short and to the point!
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 2/6/2013 2:31:00 PM
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    Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading your work that is close to your heart..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/6/2013 1:50:00 PM
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    I need this pain dissolverrr.. JK.. Jack, I know you mean well... always~ LINDA


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