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Afraid To Breath

The tic toc of the clock
never stops..... in quiet trepidation
my heart doesn't beat it knocks.
insomniac and mind tripping I
see my life slipping. I want to
breathe in air ; never again be scared
but the only thing that clings to me
is constant worry and despair.

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 5:45:00 PM

    Welcome to the soup! I've read several of your poems tonight. They all touched on many of the more difficult aspects of living. Given the number of poems you posted on your first two days, I'm going to be watching for more. Jack

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 5:25:00 PM

    I can relate. Good poem - JH

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:07:00 PM

    Your poem is fantastic, Madelin. The situation you are in doesn't sound so good. Hope things get better. Love, Kim