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Birds on the Wall

Moving her hands She forms a bird One that flies high Taking her precious hat This bird shadow wins Over her own Where she is weak The bird is massive He sits on the top of the wall Looking down She hears a chirp The shadow with a hat Produced sound Out of its formed beak Then the girl creates She creates many more bird shadows Now they flock Within the walls Of the living room All looking at her With a desire To sit on her shoulder And chirp As they all can She leaves them there While she leaves the room The birds disappear Out from her imagination Dissipated at once With her Nonchalant departure
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 6:14:00 PM

    this one is very imaginative. Quite original and cute, Russell.

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 4:25:00 PM

    Russell an imaginative gift you have shown with this write. Unique and creative wonderment of your poetic storytelling. Great job. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:51:00 PM

    Russell, a very interesting story, i like the form and imagination you imply through my vision... I am excited to read a very different poem from you... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:45:00 PM

    Russell, you clearly have a gift of the imagination. This is beautifully written my friend. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:58:00 PM

    love this clever and imaginative write, Russell