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haiku 2

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haiku 2

cresting waves
carry waning sunlight--
footprints vanish

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  1. Date: 3/18/2013 10:26:00 AM
    Ah, that quality to which all poets aspire! What talent: I am sure my second attempt at this form is nowhere close.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 3:24:00 AM
    enjoyed this Haiku here....

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 12:24:00 AM
    soupmail for ya.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:11:00 AM
    I love the haiku,,,, and the image you put forth,, happy Valentine's day Heather ;}

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 2:05:00 PM
    The sands rebirth.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Heather it amazes me with so few words a picture is formed. This reminds me of wintering in Florida, walking down the beach and the waves erases your footprints once was. A great Haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 10:35:00 PM
    i love your haiku....and the imagery ir has..A great haiku indeed sweet lady.Have a blessed Sunday

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 5:16:00 AM
    Very descriptive in a very few words..Thanks for stopping by..It is an honor for my work to be selected as a winner in your contest..Sara

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 3:56:00 PM
    wow, I just love the imagery of this one. That waning sunlight on the waves. Stunning, Heather. soupmail for ya.

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 3:34:00 PM
    I love haiku- this one is gorgeous my darling :)

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:59:00 PM
    I reayy like this one. Thanks for publishing, Jancarl

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 5:32:00 AM
    yes very clever poetry this is,,just love the image...

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:34:00 PM
    This is good, Heather! Love the image it paints. Love, KIm

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:48:00 PM
    love this one - I can almost picture myself at that beach : )