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Heather Ober
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haiku 2
cresting waves carry waning sunlight-- footprints vanish
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 3/18/2013 10:26:00 AM
Ah, that quality to which all poets aspire! What talent: I am sure my second attempt at this form is nowhere close.
Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/17/2013 3:24:00 AM
enjoyed this Haiku here....
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/16/2013 12:24:00 AM
soupmail for ya.
Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/14/2013 11:11:00 AM
I love the haiku,,,, and the image you put forth,, happy Valentine's day Heather ;}
The Situation
Date: 2/11/2013 2:05:00 PM
The sands rebirth.
Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/11/2013 12:07:00 PM
Heather it amazes me with so few words a picture is formed. This reminds me of wintering in Florida, walking down the beach and the waves erases your footprints once was. A great Haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/9/2013 10:35:00 PM
i love your haiku....and the imagery ir has..A great haiku indeed sweet lady.Have a blessed Sunday
Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/9/2013 5:16:00 AM
Very descriptive in a very few words..Thanks for stopping by..It is an honor for my work to be selected as a winner in your contest..Sara
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/8/2013 3:56:00 PM
wow, I just love the imagery of this one. That waning sunlight on the waves. Stunning, Heather. soupmail for ya.
Anne Currin
Date: 2/7/2013 3:34:00 PM
I love haiku- this one is gorgeous my darling :)
Jancarl Campi
Date: 2/7/2013 2:59:00 PM
I reayy like this one. Thanks for publishing, Jancarl
harry horsman
Date: 2/7/2013 5:32:00 AM
yes very clever poetry this is,,just love the image...
Kim Merryman
Date: 2/6/2013 3:34:00 PM
This is good, Heather! Love the image it paints. Love, KIm
jack horne
Date: 2/6/2013 1:48:00 PM
love this one - I can almost picture myself at that beach : )