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6 STRING DELIVERANCE

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6 STRING DELIVERANCE

Dr. Jack Daniels and his "W" therapy
Burns in unison, with the lava like tears
Exuding from my soul
Before it hardens and re-mold, what was
I get a hold of my drinking buddies; the same glass who always listen
And the Six String who's always talking, in a Wah effect...
The white porch bares testament of my pains
The calluses from picking those strings
Releases magma tears within my soul
To you they appear as blood
To me they're trophies?
After the bleeding, those wounds begin to scab, internally.
Clearing the distortion, chords begin to change,
Now I can play a happy song!

Scribe ML

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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 10:17:00 AM

    Damn, I love the imagery in this piece here Scribe..man, this is a burner!!!

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:01:00 PM

    Yeah - Yeah -Yeah Scribe thats what I'm lookin for - Yeah!!!! Go on and make prize outa pain Yeah - 'Magma tears as trophies...' thats dope my friend - Yeah! J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 2:24:00 PM

    Very emotive work that you have written for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 7:45:00 AM

    - If Becca likes this poem as much as I ...... then you will get first place in the the contest - good luck, Marlon. - - Have a wonderful weekend, relax. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 6:12:00 PM

    I bet you are a good musician. I wish I were talented that way. I really like how this shows your love and pride of the "six string."

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:58:00 PM

    This write really struck a chord in my heart,that sent a chill up my spine..Play on my friend,play on! :o)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 2/6/2013 4:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'll warn you next time : ). Thanks Dan! You said just let it flow, so it's all your fault!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:29:00 AM

    Oh i read you here Marlon,, it is just a pity to truly love and feel the blues one has to live it,,, i for one hope the blues always stay, but now i'm torn between you awesome poetry and the blues....

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 2/6/2013 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry! Don't let B.B. hear you say that : )
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:41:00 AM

    You write with such eloquence, I get to sup with intelligence, honesty and integrity, and I get to dine with your words, blessed may you be all the days of your life my friend, I drink to your beautiful heart and your beautiful mind, have a wonderful day, and know that the angels rejoice in heaven as you sing the blues away, happy trails and safe journey, Your MR xxx

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 2/6/2013 9:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, you are appreciated also!